https://www.triptrus.com/destination/899/air-terjun-umbul-songo
http://alamsyahrosyda.blogspot.co.id/2011/11/wisata-kopeng-salatiga.html
Kopeng is a nice place to stay especially for travelers who like nature. First, the place is in the foot of
Merbabu mountain. People can enjoy the fresh air from that place. Second, Kopeng has a place name Umbul Songo. Umbul Songo is a place where you can see a beautiful waterfall and dense pine forest. Also, it is a good place to
adventurers who like to climb a mountain. Kopeng has two Merbabu hiking
trails, such as Tekelan and Cuntel. I recommended you to pass it via Tekelan because the view is very good. Moreover, if you are strawberry lovers, Kopeng is the
best place to visit for you. There are many strawberry gardens and you can pick
the strawberry whatever you want. In addition, you can
stay in the mini hotels around Kopeng. The hotels are comfortable and cheap.
Kopeng is a nice place to stay especially for travelers who like nature. First, the place is in the foot of
Merbabu mountain. People can enjoy the fresh air from that place. Second, Kopeng has a place name Umbul Songo. Umbul Songo is a place where you can see a beautiful waterfall and dense pine forest. Also, it is a good place to
adventurers who like to climb a mountain. Kopeng has two Merbabu hiking
trails, such as Tekelan and Cuntel. I recommended you to pass it via Tekelan because the view is very good. Moreover, if you are strawberry lovers, Kopeng is the
best place to visit for you. There are many strawberry gardens and you can pick
the strawberry whatever you want. In addition, you can
stay in the mini hotels around Kopeng. The hotels are comfortable and cheap.
yes I see Kopeng. Eapecially in Merbabu track. I have many good memories there. your writing is good. I can feel every sentence. next time, it is good idea to find strawberry there.
BalasHapusHello Saras
BalasHapusI ever heard about Kopeng and I want to go to Kopeng (if I have leisure time). Anyway you write it very clear and you give some details to support your sentence. Good Job Saras and don't forget to invite me for visit your hometown.
Thankyou
Hi Yola and Menik.
BalasHapusThank you for your comments.
I will wait you in Kopeng, Yola and Menik :)
Saras:
BalasHapusThis sentence will create double ideas within your paragraph:
[1] Also, it is a good place to adventurers who like to climb a mountain.
[2] Moreover, if you are strawberry lovers...
Please focus on clarifying your topic sentence :-)